I also have gotten my portfolio review by two Advertising and Graphic Design professionals. Both were from different agencies and were Art Directors.We only had 15 minutes, so I didn't have time to ask them to fill out the critique sheet for points, but I was hoping I could still get points for it. I can provide you with their cards as proof that they did it. We were in a line and were filtered through these professionals very quickly.
Main things they suggested:
Show my process
- What is the assignment?
- What is the problem
- Your thought process - how do you think?
- Thumbnail sketches
- How did the project evolve?
I was also encouraged to create a piece that they haven't seen. With everything online, chances are good that they have seen all my work. If you leave a little booklet behind showing your process or showing something that you didn't include in your portfolio - that makes a much larger impact.
I also need to work on proofing. Only but the finely curated work into your portfolios. Check for grammar, printing quality, etc. It must be perfect!
Also USE pictures. Take pictures of you work. It adds a whole new dynamic quality to your work. For example. I have some iPhone Apps. I can take the image up on my iPhone and take an image of the phone with the app being "used". This adds more of a visual pop.
They also recommended pushing line extension further. This is exactly what we are doing with the furniture project in Graphic Design 2 -- Push your design to show that you are thinking about how your solution can work in multiple mediums.
Overall -- I gained a lot of advice and am really excited to keep improving.
I will be working on my other portfolio pieces, such as a webpage during Spring Break. They were also very adamant about being social online. Write a blog. Join Facebook and Twitter. Show your future employers that you are thinking about the best possible ways to reach people and utilizing every tool available to you.